Hello Marcella! I really like your writing. It is very descriptive, and I like the drawing. Also, Happy Birthday for yesterday! I hope you had a good day. What is your favourite part of writing? Stay safe!
Kia Ora Maia, I had a good birthday! My favorite part was the picturing and the drawing! Have you read part one of this writing? Thanks for commenting!
I really like your writing. Its fun a really exciting. Most of all I love your drawing I just want to say when you next have some # time you could fix your title. Bye!! and stay safe you spelled learning like learbning.
Kia Ora Liberty, I have fixed that mistake, i am glad you enjoyed my writing tho! It took me a while to decided what to draw, so I decied to go with a foresty, woodland, scene. Thanks for commenting!
I agree with all the comments above and I think parts 1 & 2 are just as good as each other. I really like the part where you said "the light engulfs him...."
Hello Marcella!
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing. It is very descriptive, and I like the drawing.
Also, Happy Birthday for yesterday! I hope you had a good day.
What is your favourite part of writing?
Stay safe!
Kia Ora Maia,
DeleteI had a good birthday!
My favorite part was the picturing and the drawing!
Have you read part one of this writing?
Thanks for commenting!
Kia ora Marcella Liberty here,
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing.
Its fun a really exciting.
Most of all I love your drawing
I just want to say when you next have some #
time you could fix your title.
Bye!! and stay safe
you spelled learning like learbning.
Kia Ora Liberty,
DeleteI have fixed that mistake, i am glad you enjoyed my writing tho!
It took me a while to decided what to draw, so I decied to go with a foresty, woodland, scene.
Thanks for commenting!
I agree with all the comments above and I think parts 1 & 2 are just as good as each other. I really like the part where you said "the light engulfs him...."
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting Mr P!
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