✏ Kiwi writing (WIP) ✏
Hello!
We are doing more writing! I really enjoy writing, it is my second favorite subject after art. I am only half done this work but I will be updateing it. I am not going to be reposting tho so keep checking this post if you want more update. Here you go!
Kia ora Marcella,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your wonderful writing! I don't think I have read a story told by a Kiwi before, it was very interesting. You have creatively thought of characters and settings for your stories, and I love the words you have chosen to describe your setting. I also liked the way you used words to describe how the kiwi moves such as 'waddle' - I could picture your story in my head as I read.
What will happen next for Cotton and Luna? I am very intrigued now!
Ngā mihi,
Lauren
Kia Ora Lauren,
DeleteThanks for the lovely comment!
I write a lot of stories, I try to make them as intresting as possible. It took me a while to figure out whitch characters to use.
Luna, Cotton and here other friend Toffee are going to go on a adventure, read for more! Have you ever writen any sotries?
Bye!